English: Would someone please help me with my English?

[smallwhite]

I learnt that if something happened in the past, for example, ten minutes ago, I should use past tense; and if it happened earlier than the certain time in the past, i.e. twenty minutes ago, I should use past participle [you mean Past Perfect Tense]. Am I correct?

1. "Can" instead of "should". There are other possibilities.
2. Especially with Past Perfect Tense - it is often used only when there is actual reason or need to emphasize that X happened before Y. That means, "I opened my book and started reading" is more common than "I had opened my book and started reading".

In this case, the story pulled me out from my dream, and I totally woke up. It happened AFTER I got my MP3 player. Why did you use 'had pulled' - past participle here?

> Today I woke up at 5 am. Still closing my eyes, I fumbled to get my electronic player near my pillow and turned it on in which a lady was narrating Alice’s Adventure in Wonderland in English. A few minutes later, it pulled me out completely from my dreamland…

By changing "pulled" to "had pulled", DaveAgain actually changed your story. Your version and his version mean different things. Both are correct.

Assume "A few minutes later" = 5:03

allf100's version:
5:00 woke
5:01 turned radio on
5:02 nothing happened
5:03 pulled out

DaveAgain's version:
5:00 woke
5:01 turned radio on
5:02 pulled out
5:03 had pulled out, already pulled out by 5:03

Your version kind of means "a few minutes later, the story suddenly pulled me out" (maybe due to a sudden loud bang).
DaveAgain's version kind of means "in only a few minutes time, the story had already managed to wake me" (maybe because it kept making you laugh).

DaveAgain's version is just more common and expected. Your version could be correct, too.

[Le Baron]

I know my English is bad. You don't have to encourage me about this. This doesn't throw a wet blanket on me, but keeps me learning.

I don't think your English is bad. You seem to be following the discussion perfectly well.

[noblethings]

Hello!

Would someone please proofread this piece of mine for writing exercise? If you don't have time to point all the errors out, I will be grateful if there're just a few corrections which will be very helpful.
Please just take your time. Thank you!

Home, Sweet Home

The song with stongest emotional memory attached to me is an English song titled Home, Sweet Home by American lyricist John Howard Payne and English composer Sir Henry Bishop. Most of time, I try to avoid listening to the song because it can cause many emotional ripples on my heart pond. Sometimes, it was just sneaking into my heart and playing alone involuntarily silently with a virtual gramophone called memory.

When I was teen, one day I was clumsily teaching myself to play a song on my electronic organ in our home, and my father instantly told me this was a world famous song named Home, Sweet Home in Chinese. I was very surprised, and couldn't believe he would have known that, as we lived in a small city where had little touch with the outside world.

By then, I liked this song which just sounded very beautiful, elegant, and nostalgic, but it didn't really strike a chord with me because I was happy. And I didn't realize this period was my happiest time in my life when I was care-free, though we had to pinch Chinese cents to get by.

After many years later, my father died of cancer. I moved to Shanghai. After working, I was wandering alone on the buzzing street in one of the busiest metropolis, looking up the neon lights which were winking on skyscrapers afar, but I had no idea where I was going to. I couldn't call the place I slept home. The loneliness was just like the endless evening shrouding me. I remembered the song, our humble home, my father... Some liquid was dropping down along my cheeks but it was not raining...

The song that stirs up my strongest and most emotional memories, is an English song titled "Home, Sweet Home", by American lyricist John Howard Payne, and English composer Sir Henry Bishop. Most of the time, I try to avoid listening to the song, because it forms many emotional ripples in the pond that is my heart. Sometimes, it just sneaks into my heart, and plays subconsciously, silently, through that virtual gramophone which we call "memory".

One day when I was a teen, I was clumsily teaching myself to play a song on my electronic organ in our home, and my father instantly recalled that this was a world-famous song, called "Home, Sweet Home" in Chinese. I was very surprised, and couldn't believe he would have known that, as we lived in a small city which was quite isolated from the outside world.

By then, I had already started liking the song, which just sounded so beautiful, elegant, and nostalgic. However it didn't truly impact me back then, because I was happy. And I didn't realize this period would be the happiest time in my life. I was care-free, though we had to pinch Chinese cents to get by.

Many years later, my father died of cancer. I moved to Shanghai. Most days after work, I wandered alone on the buzzing street in one of the busiest metropoles, looking up at the blinking neon lights which were attached to skyscrapers far away, but I had no idea where I was going. I could no longer call the place where I slept, "home". The loneliness felt like an endless evening, shrouding me. I remembered the song, our humble home, my father... Some liquid was dripped down my cheeks, but it wasn't raining...

[ubaid58]

I’d be more than happy to help with proofreading your English texts! I’m actually trying to improve my own Chinese too, so we can definitely exchange help. Just drop your texts here, and I’ll give them a look.