Need some polishing for a paragraph
Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2019 11:58 am
Hello, everyone. I am practicing writing. Need proofreading and polishing for the following paragraph.
"The truth is, even astral travellers, seemingly rock and rule transcending time and space freely, they were rarely born with this sort of power fully formed, they devote their time diligently to it and routine their way to go beyond."
Please correct anywhere that sounds wired to you.
Especially the last bit. what i want to express is that those astral travellers they actually practice in the concept of time to go beyond time. but i don't know how to express it simple but nice.
Thank you!!!!^3^
"The truth is, even astral travellers, seemingly rock and rule transcending time and space freely, they were rarely born with this sort of power fully formed, they devote their time diligently to it and routine their way to go beyond."
Please correct anywhere that sounds wired to you.
Especially the last bit. what i want to express is that those astral travellers they actually practice in the concept of time to go beyond time. but i don't know how to express it simple but nice.
Thank you!!!!^3^