Lianne wrote:Cainntear wrote:Intellectually, I anticipate that the most correct answer would be to replace repetitions of "one" with "he". I've done quick bit of Googling, and I've found examples of "they" and "he or she", and even of a switch to the second person... although admittedly they've avoided using the pronoun "you" and have just switched to imperative voice.
I believe that the internet data is unreliable, though, because I really imagine that it's mostly people who don't use "one" habitually trying to make themselves look fancy by writing the way they think they "should".
Consider this: if you really wanted to understand the difference between "thou" and "you", would you listen to a bunch of modern cosplayers or would you look at archived writings from the time that that was common language...?
I was telling the truth when I said I do sometimes use "one"! I'm not opposed to it being used at all; I just think the sentence that uses it over and over again feels excessive. Not incorrect, just less natural than the sentence that uses a combo of "one" and "they".
Yes, but I would still put good money on the idea that you only do it deliberately and stylistically, and that you don't have a natural pattern or use, so your instinct isn't really reliable on what the natural pattern of usage of "one" really is.
I definitely wouldn't recommend replacing it with "he", as such unnecessarily gendered language is on its way out. "They" is replacing the clunky "he or she" or the old-fashioned "he" in almost every context.
I wouldn't personally call "he" old-fashioned -- I find it more powerful to simply refer to the fact that it's not really "native English". The usage of they to denote an unspecified person is long established in English, and the usage of "he" is basically translationese from Latin, where masculine-by-default was a grammatical rule. This rule is still held by all the Romance languages, but it was really never a thing in English until some teachers decided that we should act more like Latin because that's somehow "correct" -- heck, quite a lot of them believed in the myth that Latin was the "mother" of all languages.
I grew up using "they" as an unspecified person, and I was explicitly told by my primary teachers that it was absolutely OK to speak like that (cos everyone in my village did!) but that we should never write it because it would be considered wrong. In university, I had a lecturer who was complaining that the course text book referred to the programmer as "she" and the user as "he" because of an attempt to avoid the thing where the programmer would be "he" be default. His point wasn't a reactionary "we've always done it that way, how dare you say we're wrong", but he said he'd much prefer it if they'd been allowed to do it "the Scottish way"... because the book was written by a colleague of his, a Scottish woman, who would have loved to use "they", but the publishers didn't let her.
And I had genuinely thought it was just a Scotticism, but I don't believe so any more.
But yeah... been rambling a bit.
Let me ask you this: do you think someone who gets their knickers in a twist about eliminating gendered language is going to be more effected by being told degendering is a good thing, or by being told that the language feature that they're defending is a funny foreign corruption of English...?