El Forastero wrote:BASIC ANSWER:
The text presents “revealing coloration”. It is a defensive strategy employed by some animals that use bright colors on* some parts of their bodies to confuse predators and have a chance to escape. The professor gives as an example the case of an insect called the “peanut bug”. This bug has on* its back wings some bright and colorful spots, but this part of its body is usually hidden. Whenever a predator is attacking it, it opens its wings to display these bright colors. The predator can be confused or distracted by this strategy and that provides the bug an opportunity to escape.
ADVANCED ANSWER:
The text presents to the reader “revealing coloration,” which is a defensive strategy some animals employ by using some bright-colored parts of their bodies to both confuse potential predators and also have a chance to escape when attacked. The professor gives two examples to illustrate this strategy; one of them being the case of an insect from South America called the “peanut bug,” which has on its back wings bright and colorful spots. Most of the time, when no risk is detected, the bug keeps these shining* spots hidden, but it can suddenly open its wings to display them if a predator attacks, becoming as a result confused or even distracted, and providing the bug with an opportunity to escape.
*In = inside the wings
*On = on top of the wings
*Shining = are the spots really shining or did you just use the word to make your text sound more fancy?
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