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Help needed with translations

Postby norman42 » Fri Sep 04, 2015 2:24 pm

Hi Guys,

I'm new here, suggested by a friend who is a member. He told me to post my request here as it is a truly-multilingual request.

My wife writes poems for a hobby, and I like them. Last Father's Day, she wrote me one, from the view of our one year old son. Now, I have the idea to have it translated into as many languages as possible! The world record for a translated poem stands at 203 languages. I want to beat it, as present for my wife and son. The original poem is in Dutch, but I've translated it into English as most people don't understand Dutch as well, so the English version does not rhyme.

Who would like to help with the translation? Thanks in advance.


Lievelings...
Ik heb een lievelings beer
en een lievelings boek
Een lievelings trui
en een lievelings broek
Een lievelings lied
en een lievelings bal
Een lievelings dier
en een lievelings getal
Maar het meeste word ik blij
van mijn lievelings papa… en dat ben jij!

Favourite...
I’ve got a favourite bear
and a favourite book
A favourite sweater
and favourite pants
A favourite song
and a favourite ball
A favourite pet
and a favourite number
But above all,
my Daddy makes me happiest… and that’s you!

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Re: Help needed with translations

Postby NIKOLIĆ » Fri Sep 04, 2015 3:12 pm

Serbian:

Latin script:

Omiljeni

Imam omiljenog medu
i omiljenu knjigu
Omiljeni džemper
i omiljene pantalone
Omiljenu pesmu
i omiljenu loptu
Omiljenog ljubimca
i omiljeni broj
Ali najviše me srećnim čini
tata, a to si ti!

Cyrillic script:

Омиљени

Имам омиљеног меду
и омиљену књигу
Омиљени џемпер
и омиљене панталоне
Омиљену песму
и омиљену лопту
Омиљеног љубимца
и омиљени број
Али највише ме срећним чини
тата, а то си ти!

еdit: forgot to translate the name of the poem
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Re: Help needed with translations

Postby norman42 » Fri Sep 04, 2015 3:52 pm

Thx NIKOLIĆ!
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Re: Help needed with translations

Postby Jar-Ptitsa » Fri Sep 04, 2015 5:30 pm

norman42 wrote:

Favourite...
I’ve got a favourite bear
and a favourite book
A favourite sweater
and favourite pants
A favourite song
and a favourite ball
A favourite pet
and a favourite number
But above all,
my Daddy makes me happiest… and that’s you!



It's a pity that it doens't rhyme in English. maybe you can adapt the words? I have some ideas:

I've got a favourite book
here, take a look!
I've got a favourite pet
and a train set!
I've got a favourite ball
and toys big and small!
I've got a favourite song
I will sing it, it's not long!
But more that the above,
whom I really love
is you, my daddy!

etc.
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Re: Help needed with translations

Postby Ruan » Fri Sep 04, 2015 5:49 pm

You'd have better luck if you posted this on the subReddit for every language you want this song poem to be translated into.
Anyway, here's your Brazilian Portuguese version. And it rhymes! lol.

Favourite...
Favorito...
I’ve got a favourite bear
Tenho um ursinho favorito
and a favourite book
E um livro favorito
A favourite sweater
Um suéter favorito
and favourite pants
E calças favoritas
A favourite song
Uma música favorita
and a favourite ball
E uma bola favorita
A favourite pet
Um bichinho favorito
and a favourite number
E um número favorito
But above all,
Só que mais que todos
my Daddy makes me happiest…
meu Pai me deixa mais feliz...
and that’s you!
e meu Pai é você!
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Re: Help needed with translations

Postby norman42 » Fri Sep 04, 2015 6:19 pm

I like your verses, but alas i think i have to stick to the original as it's not mine, but my wife's.
But i'll try to see if there can be soms changes which stay close...

thanks
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Re: Help needed with translations

Postby norman42 » Fri Sep 04, 2015 6:21 pm

Ruan,
thanks!

Ehm, Subreddit? I don't know this, what would that be?
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Re: Help needed with translations

Postby Ruan » Fri Sep 04, 2015 8:53 pm

norman42 wrote:Ruan,
thanks!

Ehm, Subreddit? I don't know this, what would that be?


Let's say you want to this poem translated into Czech.
So you post a request on https://www.reddit.com/r/Czech ,
or https://www.reddit.com/r/cantonese or https://www.reddit.com/r/HongKong for Cantonese, and so on.

Edit: There's a subReddit meant for translation requests. https://www.reddit.com/r/translator
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Re: Help needed with translations

Postby norman42 » Fri Sep 04, 2015 8:59 pm

clear. thx.
I'm posting in some worldwide spread facebook groups first, all with hundreds or thousands of users worldwide, but can use this option to fill in gaps. Good idea!
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Re: Help needed with translations

Postby norman42 » Sun Sep 06, 2015 9:44 am

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